Open Poetry #35 |
I Remember |
J. K. Mitchell Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 311GA |
Holding me tenderly Kissing me gently I remember a strong masculine scent Filling my nose and reminding me of you And all those little things you used to do I remember passion Burning brilliantly between you and I Flames so hot, I cared not if I died I remember love So high that it could not be overcome Overshadowed or overrun I remember you My love, my life, my heart I remember everything right from the start I remember and I long for more... |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
The wonder and magic of love captured here. I keep my eyes wide open just in case it should come around again! Very nice, enjoyed. SG |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
wonderful! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
That is what I like about past romance, it keeps those desires alive for more! Great writing. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
J.K... it's been awhile! But the sentiments of your writing stir the soul as strong as ever... Thank you! |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Nicely worded reflection upon verse |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one never really forgets, even if it's painful to remember sometimes |
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