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On Sundays, Some Days Sigh...
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On Sundays, Some Days Sigh... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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On Sundays, Some Days Sigh Wrangle me a week’s end that doesn’t… so that on Sunday, I can dream on those some days, and sigh… I could tell reality to take a hike quite far away, and taking the alarm of Monday mornings with it… to let me stretch in blessed release while still somewhat young, fantasize for some moments, on who I have become; barter with the devil, while giving God his due… yes, wrangle me a weekend, and I’ll paint skies a cerulean hue… while scaling mental mountains, and nibbling on fresh scones, then brew some thoughts along with leaves sharing tea with two…alone… “Where are you,” it is asked, when pondering deep in such quiet thoughts that I look and yearn to know myself… for this feeling is quite lost… because I know the morrow comes, chances are one in seven it will be a Monday… the alarm will ring, and music spew… while I would rather live a Sunday’s some days sigh… with you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Now see, I can tell this one just twirled from top to the tip of your pen... and I love the way your somedays sigh... I loved this lady!! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
**applauding** ~this is outstanding, Sunshine~ **baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Love it, love it. I really relate to this. Your imagery is wonderful! Thanks for the joy of Sunday SG |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
ah yes that would be nice. no work to rush to. wonderfully written Karilea. Who knows? Maybe, huh? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done ma'am.. and for such some days that we might want to sigh for..you have painted the picture well.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"while I would rather live a Sunday’s some days sigh… with you." Karilea, as I read this I was sighing a relaxing sigh all the way through. Beautifully penned...absolutely most enjoyable. Hugs~N. ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 this was so serene, and put me in a relaxed mode...now, you've done it, I WANT TO BE ON A BEACH, LISTENING TO THE OCEAN....LOL Happy Wednesday....love ya thank you for writing and sharing |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
When you quit work you will experience 7 days of Sunday sighs - liked this one a lot. Thank you for your note, also enjoyed that but I will have you know these two girls still stand up on their own.   ~* Carpe' Diem *~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I really would be wonderful if Sunday night we went to sleep and woke to another Sunday morning. Love the thoughts in this!  |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You painted a divine verbal dreamscape here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
while I would rather live a Sunday’s some days sigh… with you. Oh, yes... *softly sighing*... exactly! *S* This is beautiful, Sunshiney One!! *S* |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Yeah, I felt this one. I love the Sunday quiet and feel of nothing that has to be done right now. But Monday looming on the horizon makes me nervous. I really like the way you use words in this one. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Now, if I could just get two children to understand Sundays and how precious they can be .. well written KJ...I know the feel of this very well. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M'dear Sun, I do believe you just wrangled me a weekend by poetically painting the skies a cerulean hue!  Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
while I would rather live a Sunday’s some days sigh… with you. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ya know I am loving the sigh of that verse. wisfully lovely... ( Im still working on the dream post) yep...always the tardy moth these days. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Give me a Sunday anytime...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
SIL, this does speak to so much truth and carries the honest touch.....well said. Yep, me, too....although I shouldn't complain at all as the last couple of years have afforded me much more control over my own time...time to discover. One of my favorites of yours, I think...it just holds much meaning for me, perhaps. ....jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a calm and gentle feeling this gave me awesome write! |
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