Open Poetry #35 |
Someone gave me wings. |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Some days it doesn’t even matter whether or not the weather hits me between the eyes or the thighs, it’s just another chilled day, huddled up against myself wondering why the clouds pretend to know what storms are about, even as harsh winds beat me down while climbing the hillside to reach some unknown height. I slide all the way back down. Gravity keeps me stuck here, but please don’t worry... my spirit knows there is an open window; so nothing can stop me as long as I remember the choice of the exit is always mine. And no, this isn’t about sadness or doom but about a spirit which chooses to fly no matter what force of gravity dictated by any given hostile situation might dare bring it down. Someone gave me wings. I just have to remember to use them. |
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wandering glider Senior Member
since 2001-04-04
Posts 501aloft |
Handy, aren't they? Stay as free as you need to be . . . and hope there is not another storm brewing. glider |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed, midnitesun. "Someone gave me wings. I just have to remember to use them." Liked the above especially. It sounds easy but how quickly we forget. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Many uses for these wings ,,,, but we do seem to find our own special use when time gives us the opportunity ...... .... thank you for all your time... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"my spirit knows there is an open window; so nothing can stop me as long as I remember the choice of the exit is always mine. And no, this isn’t about sadness or doom but about a spirit which chooses to fly" Beautiful Kacy... absolutely beautiful!! ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hmmm... those wings..we do forget we have them don't we..and that we have the choice... nicely done ma'am.. indeed.. made me stop and think |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
'the choice of the exit is always mine." yes. the exit, the life. We choose. Well done Kacy! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
but about a spirit which chooses to fly ~*~ I can think of at least one young person who did just this for you... and he's a blessing! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
my spirit knows there is an open window exactly! A beautiful write about strength and lightness. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kacy....I do believe that someone gave you wings!! "Could there be a God within this place of sky the birds have come and gone and left me flight yet no where to go to find the invisible thread I yearn to sew but yes I tangle lines instead" (from one of my many poems about wings) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
your replies make me want to belt out a Bette Midler tune (LOL) thanks, to each of you, who give me a lift each time you read and understand |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
but of course...what's an angel without her wings? You earned them! Spread them proudly! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"but please don’t worry... my spirit knows there is an open window;" ~ Yes, I know your spirit knows! Someone gave me wings. I just have to remember to use them. ~ Yeppers, and He's always there to remind you! Kacy, this was such an open expression of your soul. We all can learn from your sharing of self. Love & Spirit Light, Linda |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Oh God Kacy I ADORE this because you know what? We ALL have wings and it is that lil' nudge that gets us up and flying and My God I am so grateful to way too many people for pushing me out of the nest. I am so grateful for you because you always set it straight no matter how you are feeling. Even when you cry, I betcha it is the most beautiful sight . . . my spirit knows there is an open window; so nothing can stop me as long as I remember the choice of the exit is always mine.. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Absolutely magical...Take flight, my friend, and continue until morning...there is no limit to where your wings can take you...I love this wonderful poem...*big hugs* |
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