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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City 
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and already the heart in its velvet depths, mauve and inviolate, is bathed in your voice, all dream over the summer's pulmonary blue tapestries of rain, of rain, as it comes to anoint the muted earth, cerulean the wet soul, perishing beneath these thick promises of fever, I come away from your kiss with something of your lips still in my words, burn baby, burn, as our fists open quietly in the heavy downpour, the nimble body kneels in the long grass, burning its delirium tucked into the curled furrows of slim muscles, quivering in their swollen cribs of rain, of rain, as it coos over these fading shades of gold and gray equilibrium, quieted by the passage of wings and somewhere overhead, sparrows bruise their cobalt shadows on these long, blue ribbons of rain and vertigo consumes my wounds as they sing to the heart, in its velvet depths, mauve and inviolate and already bathed in your voice, all dream. ...from the DreamSequence... 2005 copyright babygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** [This message has been edited by babygirlwlove (06-08-2005 12:21 PM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Damn bbg.... this just became my favorite of your writes...and I didnt think it was possible to have a fav cuz I like everything you write but this... this moves me...  you have an incredible talent of word.  I really want to care, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
sounds like one heck of an out of body experience very well done.....boy I love reading you, you take me to marvelous places of insight and learning... again....bravo! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dreams seem to have recently taken over my awaking moments as well... and indeed, some burn... but at least you got yours in print.  Enjoyed this, Mari.... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oooooooooooooo, sparrows bruise their cobalt shadows on these long, blue ribbons of rain and vertigo consumes my wounds as they sing to the heart, in its velvet depths, mauve and inviolate and already bathed in your voice, all dream. Wish I could even begin to think in techicolor as you do! One of my favorites from the book! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah...it would seem from all I have read of late..and scratched out on ppaer myself, that rain..and this season of rain..finds its way into words..and in the case of this and others I have read..into art.. nicely done ma'am..as always... you weave the images and words into something that one can draw from each time they read..another bit or byte of meaning... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
bgl, your b b b, was beyond AOK! You sure know how to bring the reader into your moments! Keep on dreaming and I'll keep on reading!  EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I agree with Ron...I too was taking notice of all the "rain" offerings... truly magnificent mix of dreams and rain... "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
hey PIP family~ thank you all for peeking in on this ol' cat...all the thoughts and support are deeply felt and greatly appreciated.... much love to you all~ oh...and Chief~ shoot....getting wet in rain is as much fun...as burning... love&fire, **baby cat** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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