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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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The storm Is long and loud Yet however hard The rain may fall This sadness will stay In the summer air And when morning comes On another day It will still be here Only more familiar Than it was before |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
interesting perspective....and yet, out of great concern, I say, it will only be, as we allow it to be... well done and beautifully said! Hugs to you John |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
And the wind can't blow it away either. Well-written. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
sometimes we must become intimate with it in order to live with it.  I love rain but storms are my favorite. They come, they cause all sorts of upset, then they leave and things calm down. A reminder that this too shall pass.. Really enjoy this reading, thank you! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I know these days well... sometimes they gain the name of a month because they will not leave. Excellent work!! |
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