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Charmin Hung Softly
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Charmin Hung Softly |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
It was Rapunzel with olden strung hair, Cascades of white tassels trimmed leaves and air. Charmin hung softly with leaves sailed the breeze, A thousand strings dipping, willowed in tease. "Bah Humbug-what a mess the dew drops will bring!" Yet, for one brief moment before wrongs or rights, Her imagination was charmed by the artistic site. (I imagine this was a "celebration" for graduation. In any case, for a moment, the tree wore its tassels well.) |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Definitely not a tree of woe .... ... a beautiful image, thanks for the peek! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love it! This put a smile on my face this morning. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I remember those days...giving and receiving both I think my dad was glad when I moved out |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Made me laugh, sis! Like the light-hearted feel of this....well done!  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your muse never fails to amuse!  Linda |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
charmin poem Cathy - loved the sense of this - remember well my kids cleaning up those charms... Paul |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderful!! Much enjoyed! |
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