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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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This nefarious night beckons a side of me that longs for the touch of your intellect. Morphing me into something far more worthy. This, the dark night screams for you to teach me of things I never knew. Things of skin against skin slick with the perspiration of lustful greed. A lust born from your eyes with the knowledge that leaks forth in the form of peaceful resolution. Knowing this is more than the primal thrust of urgency and selfish need. It is a merging of two negative forces begot from the loins of a world of wounds inflicted by forked tongues. Two negatives that remit a light on this, a nefarious night. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"It is a merging of two negative forces begot from the loins of a world of wounds inflicted by forked tongues." smile sounds like a conception to me...a big bang perhaps?   loved this, you  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
interesting write..ad a bit different for you Ma'am... but good...and seasoned well with elements that pique the taste.. enjoyed... as usual |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
kind of sinister but sweet the temptations of the night very cool write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes Susan, this screams of the touch of something much deeper than just the need.... extremely well done with this one lady! I really want to care, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I usually don't admit this, but I had to pull out the dictionary...cool word thoughts well penned indeed |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Karen...lol..yes a conception for sure, especially for me.  Ron...  different? yes..but it was inspired.Michele...thank you muchly! Donna...exactly...much. Dixie...lol..it was a new word for me, the person that spoke it had to tell me what it meant, then I promptly said, "I like it, I am going to use it." "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wow..love this one Susan! I know that need of which you speak.. It's one that is really hard to explain.. but, you described it perfectly. Hugs lovely lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This nefarious night beckons a side of me that longs for the touch of your intellect. Morphing me into something far more worthy. This, the dark night screams for you to teach me of things I never knew. Things of skin against skin slick with the perspiration of lustful greed. A lust born from your eyes with the knowledge that leaks forth in the form of peaceful resolution. Knowing this is more than the primal thrust of urgency and selfish need. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Well this just flat out rocks! I loved and so understand the truth your first verse speaks of....that connection of minds is as intense as one of physical... and yepppers... that nefarious allit rocks too. very very cool poem Susan.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write Susan! Eric |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ever go back and review your old stuff? you know you do... This one leaves me shaking my head now...I remember what and who it was about and I am back now to say that intellectual connection alone doesn't fill the glass.. It is impossible to get everything you need from one person. That is what I have learned. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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