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Eternities Flame {more from the ramble series....}
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Eternities Flame {more from the ramble series....} |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Yesterday seems to have slipped away quickly, so quickly the tick of time has passed by in rhyme. Where has yesterday gone? There is nothing more transparent than this apparent facade of falsities and the fallacious emotions that we have strung on heart strings silver threaded feelings the pull and tug harder each time we burn ourselves singeing our love while tempting fate {and didn't we say, love's just a game?} but this wildness can't be tamed caught somewhere between love and hate hurry, hurry tomorrow may be too late it is our need, we feed neither one is to blame so thus, we dance in eternities flame. I really want to care, I want to feel something, let me dig a little deeper nah, still nothing~ my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-07-2005 09:15 PM).] |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
tick tock....hurry...love today...we might not have tomorrow... this is beautiful, you have captured the human spirit and need for love so perfectly |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
*sigh* profound truth flows in your words as the spirit cries out for love...Absolutely magnificent...you write what many of us have felt...*hugs* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you ladies, both very much for the beautiful replies. Hugs to you  I really want to care, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"we burn ourselves singeing our love while tempting fate {and didn't we say, love's just a game?} but this wildness can't be tamed" love those lines Donna. Mainly because I have lived there, in the flame. Now I just bask in it's warmth and it is so much more fulfilling. Know what I mean? "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Susan, you understand.... exactly that. you do know me so well lady.....grinz... Love has it's own time, it's own season, and it's own reasons for coming and going. You cannot bribe it or coerce it or reason it into staying. If it chooses to leave, from your heart or the heart of a lover, there is nothing you can do and nothing you should do. Be glad that it came to live for a moment in your life. If you keep your heart open, it will surely come again. From Simple Truths Author Kent Nerburn [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (06-08-2005 10:17 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully and truthfully penned Donna. Love ya lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ooohhhh....does this hit home, or what?  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: To know those flames is to truly BE. I love the music produced by your words also. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
magnificent m'gentle one Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't you know I just love this series! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I believe when we stop over rating love, being co-dependent on it, we start to truly understand what love really is...in it's many many forms...to many people today say, I love you, but don't understand...looking to strongly for that power, thinking it is sex...making love is only one small aspect of what it truely is...love is certainly not looing to someone else for happiness...if your not happy with yourself, if you don't love who you are, without plastic surgery, and face lifts...jewelry and the best cloths...well, you'll never be happy with yourself, and you just make someone else very unhappy....sad, but true... this was simply amazing...thank you for sharing...and also this Love has it's own time, it's own season, and it's own reasons for coming and going. You cannot bribe it or coerce it or reason it into staying. If it chooses to leave, from your heart or the heart of a lover, there is nothing you can do and nothing you should do. Be glad that it came to live for a moment in your life. If you keep your heart open, it will surely come again. From Simple Truths Author Kent Nerburn when you try to chain love, it becomes an evil monster... Hugs to ya gal... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"facade of falsities and the fallacious" ~ richly alliterative! "that we have strung on heart strings silver threaded feelings" ~ Beautifully put. Donna, I do enjoy your rambles. They are so vividly and emotionally expressed and I am always impressed by your unique turns of phrase! Love ya! Linda |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
ramble on!!! I am so enjoying this series of poems! love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Well done. Many truths in this...and the replies... CG |
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