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Bedtime Stories (2) Nightmares
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Bedtime Stories (2) Nightmares |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
it was how midnight's breeze vivified the sheers draping that chilled me was not fresh the dirt turned upon a past none suspected save God and moon? you intent upon avenging blood spilled and I powerless silent pleas hung heavy between spaces where sympathy was foriegn in this land of ravage your lips stripped cellophaned denial stole comfort with white hot touch this night, accursed me with reasons for life and death beneath the knowing the rythmic knowing Yes... ~tier  [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (06-06-2005 11:42 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now this is the kind of writing that I have been missing from you during your far-too-long absence! You had me hooked right from the get-go! ~ "it was how midnight's breeze vivified the sheers draping that chilled me" ~ Yeppers! Pure Tiersdin! Keep 'em comin'! You've whetted my appetite for more! more! more!  Hugs with love, Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"your lips stripped cellophaned denial stole comfort with white hot touch this night, accursed me with reasons for life and death beneath the knowing the rythmic knowing Yes..." Excellent write Tier! A keeper for my library. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Linda & Nancy for taking the time to read and comment so kindly! *hugs* ~tier |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the read |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
My My MY.... I do hope there are more. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I have no idea why but this reminded me of a tryst with a vampire. (as if I would know) Beautiful writing, Tier - as always |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh hell yeah...**shivers** love&light, **Mari** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your lips stripped cellophaned denial stole comfort with white hot touch this night, accursed me with reasons for life and death beneath the knowing the rythmic knowing Yes... heck, when it comes right down to it, what else is there, nothing in this world, can replace the knowing of these words...and that's the wealth of it... Tremendous write |
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