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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Again, you came in silent flutter. Gliding gently upon a night breeze, skirting the blinded hand....letting the scent of “Red” lure me, slowly raise me as silk slips from a shoulder and lands delicately, softly upon a darkened bed...cooling before a fire again burns and pricks the soul of passion. Again, you boil the blood of desire, sooth the ache of lust, whisper softly in chorus...as I mutter in want... Please, please touch not the skin that wakes.... Again, the torrid dream basks the earth of my wretched soul...await me... as a breath coaxes the fires, and embers rise to morn... Feed the wanting flesh, quell the cries of longing...sooth the dark...hush the rising day... Again, my tears wash...and a quivering lip tastes the curve of ruby red ...as soft traces linger and glowing embers float into the swirling night...again.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! this is red HOT |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
You are getting the ladies all hot and bothered today, Sir. Well, somebody's got to do it. |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
Well done. Appeals to the senses, is ethereal and lends itself to tie into domone elses experiences. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
...and still I dream... beatifully written, M. only three replies? that'll never do! ~tier  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhh, those moments of soft dreams...two bodies finding daylight together... beautiful!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Awww, that's not fair! You got my blood boiling again and my ruby lips quivering! ~ and here I lie, I mean "sit", all by my lonesome... Oh, well! I think I'll go have a scintillating daydream!   Linda |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Passion wafted on the wings of unbound rose petals... Nicely done, Magnus. CG |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This, dear Barry, calls for sighs! I thought I will read Barry's poem as the last one for tonight ... it will be peacefully romantic, instead I find it is PASSIONATELY romantic! Unlike Linda I will not daydream, but just simply DREAM ... it's bedtime. Nite! Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooh yesss....again!!  ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry? This is very!! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
What a passionate vision you weave to send ladies to their dreams...WOW!!! you light a flame that is fed with you words...Stunning...*hugs* |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Red hot write, alright! Howya doin' BJ? Good reading you again....I'm so behind in my reading! ....jo |
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