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yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

0 posted 2005-06-05 05:05 PM

And with the dawn of another day
Me buscas empezando portí

I wait for your sound to reach
The soul of me and
Rip me from such lighthearted
Darkness as to push
Los sombras de mis ojos

Why does it seem that
I can never be fully satisfied with
The thougt of your heart

Béseme y
I will be set free

Liberated from this fire
That defies all that nature intended us
Happiness, sweet happiness
In the confines of ourselves

Amante
Mi amante
Me toca
Tu sonries con la luz
Del sol

And with this sunlight I am reminded of
Grace and sweet solitude

Tu sonrisa me toca
Con el amor de
Los ángeles
And send my eyes into sweet repose

With every beat of this
Lover's rock
I send myself into a reverie of endless
Joy

With your inner sunshine
Me rescata de esta
Oscuridad eterna
And hold me softly
En tus brazos

Forever
Y siempre
Make love to thought of our
Lips dancing in the wind
Como las estrellas en
Crepúsculo prohibido

yv

P.S. If anyone needs me to translate anything I will be more than glad to do so. This is my first attempt at writing a poem with Spanish and English segments. Tell me truths of how you feel.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-06-05 05:23 PM

I could feel the depth and passion of the
poems english....some of the spanish...
and though a translation might add somewhat
to the feel....I think its message is loud
and clear.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2005-06-05 06:00 PM

muy amablemente dicho
una expresión hermosa de amor

I keep a fragrance bottle my
muse gave me when I met him
in endless winter and he
settled me into remembering
who I am.

yv
Senior Member

since 2003-05-30

Posts 574

3 posted 2005-06-05 06:44 PM

Thank you for your replies. I really appreciate them.

Magnus...I know that a translation would definitely help with the understanding...but I felt the sudden urge to explore the more sensual side of my writing by using the Spanish...but I am glad that you see the meaning behind all the madness.

Muchas gracias, Ojos de Verde...Estoy muy contenta que tu comprendas el español. Es importante que expréseme completamente y tengo la comprensión de las otras poetas. Entonces, yo digo muchas gracias, otra vez.

God bless.

Yv-Goddess of Her Domain. Symbol of Truth Passion Pain. Let Her Smile Rain on the Hearts of the Innocent.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-06-05 07:16 PM

I am really enjoying this blending, only wish my Spanish knowledge was better! I grew up hearing it yet never mastered it...dumb me, LOL, studied French, German and Hebrew, and a smattering of Japanese instead.
Mon Dieu!

wandering glider
Senior Member

since 2001-04-04

Posts 501
aloft

5 posted 2005-06-05 09:57 PM

I couldn't pick up quite all of it either, but enjoyed it nontheless.
Wish I could do this kind of blend in Spanish, or French for that matter, but I would have a long way to go.

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