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Childhood Daze
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Childhood Daze |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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Childhood Daze  Eerie echoes of children’s voices fill deserted playgrounds of the mind as shadows play little games of hide and seek Heart swings higher... ever higher... ’up to the moon’ Teeter-totter of emotions... up... down... up... down... ...down... Merry-go-round spins faster... ever faster... as the world spins out of control... Life... a grown-up model of the playgrounds of yesterday... ______________ *Revised Repost... because... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Interesting imagery and emotions well expressed. Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Revisions of something familiar are good... they show us how much stronger it and we have become.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your talent is showing, Ms Vicky! A clever title ~ as is the body of the poem! ~ which had my body and spirit swinging to and fro with your vividly descriptive writing! Let's you and I go to a sun-filled happy playground where you and I can swing together! ~ Hmmm, that didn't come out 'write'! Sending you a loving hug and a bucket-full of new hopes and dreams, Love & Light, Linda |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Another great image. Same play... different stage. Enjoyed. Melton |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Enjoyed the contrast. Remembering the play grounds of days past. Dizzy with fear and yet delighted, enjoying shrieks of laughter. Mixed emotions. The play ground of today is so much more complicated, and still we swing and teeter totter and spin in circles of emotions. Not as much fun as days gone past. With you on this, best martyjo |
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