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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 The Tiber *** Placid River *** I stand mesmerized by the placid flow of your essence. Your soft murmur leaps into my heart slowing the cadence of my life. You show me the constant motion of all of creation. And though together we race through space, I only feel a tiny shift of air. It’s the sweep of time in which we dance. My soul glides into your tune and you carry me to faraway shores, while I stand enthralled, motionless yet soaring high, becoming at once the observer and the observed. Lost in contemplation of You, my placid river, I AM. *** Love, Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a vision so devine~ especially when invisioned from one's soul as yours~ a real beauty, thanks for sharing~ My spirit will rise |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
exceptional |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very well done very much enjoyed  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"My soul glides into your tune and you carry me to faraway shores, while I stand enthralled, motionless yet soaring high, becoming at once the observer and the observed. Lost in contemplation of You, my placid river, I AM." Margherita, this was better than a Calgon bath ... taking me away to the land of tranquility. I always enjoy the beauty and spirituality of your poetry. Thanks for sharing this moment of peace.  ....jo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita, your poetry flows with the grace of the Divine Spirit. I always come away with a smile on my face ~ and in my soul.  Loving hugs and soul smiles, Linda |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
So beautiful, the stillness of a peaceful soul. Stunning visions. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a beauty! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
simply bliss |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M... nicely done, makes me want to sit on the bank and daydream a little bit. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
How can one mention the Tiber and not think of Rome . . . |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Simply lovely, Marherita, and ditto to what everyone else has said. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you all my dear poet friends for your loving comments. Huan dear, I don't THINK of Rome, I BREATHE it. This poem was inspired by a picture my son took from the bank of the Tiber. It would have been nice to post HIS photograph, but it is not linked to internet, so I found a substitution which is quite similar. Love and have all a wonderful Sunday. Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
OMG....I want to go there...especially after ingesting your words, seems dreamy...thank you for sharing not only such beautiful imagry, but the photo as well...wonderfully magical. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Very nice poetic image |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ Gorgeously inviting~ *sigh* at the beauty of your thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
A wonderful write! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Margherita...Wonderful poem. The river of your life flows as smooth as you words...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear poet friends for stopping by the riverside with me ... You are so kind. Love and Joy. Margherita |
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