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Open Poetry #35

Knock, knock, knock, Somebody In There?

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

0 posted 2005-06-03 03:38 PM

And…

mind candy turned its ocean blue eyes

   like an old child, with a poetic pen

wading in obsession…

   evolving under heaviness

pounding my mind, trying to get in…

   endeavors feeling the scorch of embryonic

while God’s remain optimistic

   questions being an aperture to the future

singing..."That ol Black Magic"

cutting down forests of romanticism

  that I’d know personally, for so long

gaining an inherited land, loosing an evolved self

  vast ghostly networks, error-coding

muti textured density of springs eternal

   alien inhabits

goggle, the New Testament matrix

   sitting in the mezzanine of open arms

perspective holographs of humanity

    painting new dimensions

perhaps, new global pencils

    writing in renaissance 3D spheres

vitruvian man "is alive" with a conscious

    who reminds us

"you’ve got mail" and a history

    learning experiences, connecting the dots

what tasks will sound in 50 years?

   Chasing us like soul explorers

new dimensions....leaning on us

correcting our shrinking heavy forms

   ink-stained, finger pointing keyboards

knock, knock, knock, hey, is somebody in here?

   the gal in a plastic bubble

artificial intelligence

   roaming everywhere

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-06-03 06:27 PM

I get out of breath reading you sometimes...you incorporate so much into each posting...

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-06-03 06:31 PM

LeeJ

Your poems are "mind candy"!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2005-06-03 06:31 PM

You know,
someday I want to see
just what you have
on your desktop...

and background.

Nothing mundane, me thinks...

youcan'tseeme
Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 88

4 posted 2005-06-03 07:10 PM

somewhat amazing

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