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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-06-03 08:15 AM

where speaks the piper's agony
my eyes search the mist
my hands hold weld with meld
the metal of a dreamer's religion

I know not of tomorrow
thus my dreams are but armor's binding
the gallop of my steed's shoeless shod
in the slip-slung of a winter's pretending

come quick mistress of indigo
with brittle fingers touching
between asunders and satiation
the male seams of my seemless heal

kneel with nylon'd knees at my statue
and salivate your vulgar recital
spend the demure of your imodesty
as a laughter's coins hurried crosswise

like the rains on the arenaceous sahara
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babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

1 posted 2005-06-03 08:36 AM

darkie~

pure silk...
pure Dark~

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-06-03 10:27 AM

have to agree with babygrl -

silken dark -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2005-06-03 11:24 AM

very nicely done

Aleta
Member

since 2005-04-17

Posts 102
Louisiana

4 posted 2005-06-03 11:56 AM

Something to be covered, to screen the darkness of this poem, to bring my mind to thoughts left best unanswered. Maybe I'm reading into this poem a tad too much and I will not go there in explanation.... but needless to say.... an interesting write.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

5 posted 2005-06-03 01:58 PM

always a lesson..and always a pleasure ot read you sir...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-06-03 03:30 PM

thanks to you all for the read

you bless my humble offerings

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-06-03 04:43 PM

believe everyone above me said it best
You are a wonder...
excellent...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-06-03 04:48 PM

Stay humble...
and stay dark.

It's always a pleasure...

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-06-15 09:28 AM

yes, you are a pleasure

to more than one's mind:

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2005-06-15 10:23 AM

Old One-Eye might be intruiged by this.

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