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Cat and Mouse |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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My god I had tenacity and this is what I am, reduced, to pleading with your eyes of lead enticed by little girls seduced by luxury of feeling good lies like cats in sprawl of this: silky satin wishfulness awakened rudely by the thrall of thumb and fingertip in rough calloused by the knowledge of tiny tenderloins are cut too rough against the grain Cat is thumping restlessness waiting for the pounce abstained licking scent from perfect paw a preparation of the hunt administration of last rites as the rage whispers the urge of claws become a cage of lust and razors bite and break the back sharp is merciful I said as I shook the rodent slack and sighed a pause of playfulness-- so sorry it was dead I said, "What else is there to do?" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read you this morning |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
 oh hell yes... **feeling you, Serenity** ~Cheshire Grin~ **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*chuckle* thanks dixie and marie and yanno? I just had to steal that cat! Gotta love it!  |
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WhiteRose Member Elite
since 2002-07-23
Posts 3208somebody's dungeon |
You never disappoint me. Great read. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"licking scent from perfect paw a preparation of the hunt administration of last rites as the rage whispers the urge of claws become a cage of lust and razors bite and break the back sharp is merciful I said" Awesome read, Serenity. Merciful. And the lust. Really, I kinda had to chuckle, too. But when read another way, this poem is just plain powerfully strong. I love that about your poems...many times, I find more than one meaning. And hey, sometimes I'm just to thick to get it on the first read.... but each time I read, I am even more greatly impressed than the first time. Well....I'm off to catch a rat.....lol...just kidding.  ....jo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Can I just say 'wow'?... cuz yeah... wow... "When the power of love overcomes the love |
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