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The Real Of Me
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The Real Of Me |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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I thought I would try a little bit different style of writing, so please don't put too much into this. Paul The Real Of Me By Paul Wilson Together we dance upon the grave of our memories Laughing out loud like the jester with his painted smile I see thru your vail of secrecy and what you thought you could hide from me Fires of hell reflect into my eyes as I pray for redemption Damn the fire let it burn memories of yesterday feed the flames Dance the dance of lost souls walk thru flames with a smile The winds and tides will cease as we mock the wolf howling at the moon Come with me to the edge of time expose the real of me for all too see ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul [This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (06-03-2005 04:50 AM).] |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
WOW I really like this peice Paul, and perhaps because I am working on something that includes, souls and wolves lol Great work, and I love the way the new style looks on you. Tima |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Tima...Thanks so much for indulging me. I love too read free verse and try too get inside the writters head and figure out what they are feeling and writing about. Good luck on your new poem I will be looking for it...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I like free verse, too. Intense write, Paul!  ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Paul, you have made a wonderful entrance into free verse! This is a very captivating piece. It's great to explore new possibilities isn't it? Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dingdangnation! You wrote outside of the box very well! You stretched your poetic wings quite successfully!  Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love your newest style here! well done Paul |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
iliana...Thanks for reading and your reply...Paul Margherita...Glad you think so. Thats what it's all about exploring the mind.Thanks for taking time too read and reply...Paul Linda...Now thats a word I haven't heard before.Dinddangnation???? Thanks for making me smile and for your reply. I may have too try this style more often...Paul Dixie...Thanks dear lady for your kind words. Changes and exploring new options in life maybe both of us are doing this...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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