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PazSqual
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0 posted 2005-06-02 11:52 PM



i too hate good-byes

as we take the different paths
of the fork on the road
in which we walked together for a while
our lives are going to change
the distance between us will expand
the communications will be fewer
maybe even stop completely
some memories will began to fade
but there will always be
that special feeling
embedded deep within my heart
that special feeling
that will keep our friendship from falling apart


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-06-03 02:34 AM


dang
JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-06-03 02:51 AM


Nice...James
HopeS
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3 posted 2005-06-03 03:19 AM


Wonderfully expressed , I can relate i too hate goodbyes

Hope

timothysangel1973
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4 posted 2005-06-03 04:13 AM


Great write !!

I never say Goodbye, because GB's are forever...

Tima

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2005-06-03 08:22 AM


There is a wonderful trust in these words, and how it should be.

Well done Paz.
TD

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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6 posted 2005-06-03 03:57 PM


you betcha...this was great, enjoyed!

sometimes, less is our more?  But what I know is, we can certainly progress with these special souls by our sides, if only in spirit...knowing always, and forever.

aRiEsAnGeL
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since 2004-03-04
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7 posted 2005-06-04 01:56 PM


Everything will be great.I kind of know how this feels.I am kind of in the same situation.Im there with you.Thank you for your write,im not in it alone.Love to you.
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