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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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infatuated, i rolled around in your mouth high pitched therapist, of farm gal threads seamstress of adolescence that didn’t need much passages twisting resembling show vs. tell southern gates looking farther north like sand dollar story telling chunks of themselves reshuffled into leather gods myth making principles this side of reality tornado carrying me into fantasy holding visions, like a pulse of life touch stones of think and dream literature of an open mind evolving into awe imaginary, outer reaches too paralyzed to cope wondering what manufactures realism we talked a lot about, human existence far above savagery, a strong tendency with u-turns permanence deriving cogent ideas uncertain future dates, real then, the postcard came probing marrow in my bones wondering sometimes, if I loved you to much |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lee~ 'touch stones of think and dream' This, in it's entirety, is a touching splash of ink~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lee, I was going to choose my favourite lines.. but, I would end up copying the poem in it's entirety. This is wonderful descriptive writing... Love you and your style lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Is there really such a thing? It's easy to second guess ourselves when our love is not returned. But I don't think it's possible to put limits on how much love we feel for someone, even if it is too much! I don't know, you always get my wheels turning, and it's always a treat you, LeeJ~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Lee...Isn't it wonderful how our minds work allowing us too express ourselves in poetry and too venture where we've never been. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I have known some leather gods--they always felt sticky in the sun... this is like a long road winding, backward in the rearview mirror.  and a little sigh, what it meant to me, has more to do with me than your intent I suspect, but your work has that effect.  Enjoyed, Lady Lee. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What is most provoctative about this is substance... and it weighs heavy. An excellent write, Lee. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, my! Great write, LeeJ. ....jo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Your excellent poem brought back a memory. It made me think of my Mother who had cherished for a lifetime a postcard from the one who had touched her heart, but life had separated them ... She had lived her life though, but even in old age she sometimes remembered and wondered ... I think we can say that we love too much, when we DEPEND on that specific subject to be happy. This IS definitely a dangerous situation. Great write! Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gawd yer good! A provocative write, indeed! ~ and you did it with verbiage that was rich and brimming with zestfulness! May you be as loved as well as you love!!! Great write, Lovely Lee! Hugs with love, Linda  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And if you'd loved less... you'd wonder then, too. *S* This is excellent... every line's a winner! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
much enjoyed this one Lee |
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