»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #35
»
Regulators And Rain
| Open Poetry #35 |
|
Regulators And Rain |
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
And in the tick of space between pendulum swings when there is an apogee of arc that for the eternity of one thousandth of a heartbeat holds all suspended in weightless wait... before the fall again to rise on the other side of some pivot pointer design to divide such halves that make one whole yet still must keep apart in that moment I find suspended my own spill of words weighted as with the clockfaced refuse left I thought behind and I dare to think of how on some upswing against grave gravity there is a twin place and when but the memory of my own moment resides in shattered elapsed time stained with bitter tears the other too will know some glimpse of the way two such moments strung along the thin line of thought might just might be enough for some lost part of you or me to hold one more time... onto one less time subtracted from the metronomic drone tick tick tick tick tock tock tock tock separate it comes in cyclical bleed of mainsprings and quartz that deafens ears on quiet days when no one wants to leave and both halves are disjointed to the sweep of seconds round and round as hours go one more now one less then still in all the circles run we find ourselves again alone |
||
| © Copyright 2005 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"we find ourselves again alone" perfect title, perfect words.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
thanks Ms Susan.. some rainy days run in circles... |
||
SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"to divide such halves that make one whole yet still must keep apart in that moment I find suspended my own spill of words weighted as with the clockfaced refuse left I thought behind and I dare to think of how on some upswing against grave gravity there is a twin place and when but the memory of my own moment resides in shattered elapsed time stained with bitter tears the other too will know some glimpse of the way two such moments strung along the thin line of thought might just might be enough for some lost part of you or me to hold one more time... onto one less time subtracted from the metronomic drone" ~*~ you've gone right to my heart with this...yes, yes you sure have  this is pure treasure... |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ms Sea.. your eyes..and such kind words.. go right to the heart of me... thank you ma'am |
||
|
Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing looking at things through your eyes. Well done Sir..very well done. Hugs~N ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
||
|
SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 bunches and bunches |
||
|
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"tick tick tick tick tock tock tock tock" I loved the way you demonstrated your meaning, so simply and yet the seperation of the tick and tock, illustrated the twinning perfectly. and may it rain all summer I say. It suits me.  |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ms N... thank you maam.... |
||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I have several antiquated timepieces with their eternal, maternal, paternal tick of time, and while I have never found just the right tock to display the emotion, let me let you know, please, that it is thus. And I thank you for the gift of tock. |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ms Sea.. ya'all done gone and made me blush... lol.. but dang..it felt nice.. |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Karen.. simple is as simple does.. or some such murder fo a quote.. hugs my lady... with a big thank you thank you.. for the read and the nice words.. |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Lady Sunshine... the gift or the curse? sometimes I wonder which indeed it is... but if it pleased your eyes and the thoughts you wove around it thus..then you are more than welcome for the gift.. |
||
Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
round and round as hours go one more now one less then still in all the circles run we find ourselves again alone'''' the rain can be so lonely sometimes....but how refreshing it can also be....nicely done, good to see ya here.....cpat..  I came from the mountain |
||
|
Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
always good to see you ma'am... thanks for taking the time..to read my drivel dribbled here.. and for the nice words.. |
||
|
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
before the fall again to rise on the other side of some pivot pointer design to divide such halves that make one whole ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nobody hits a nerve like you do, or tugs at the heart so hard. Really enjoyed reading this Cpat, that verse especially...and this ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ still in all the circles run we find ourselves again alone ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ And nobody says it better than you do! Gosh, it's always so good to read you. |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron "the other too will know some glimpse of the way two such moments strung along the thin line of thought might just might be enough for some lost part of you or me to hold one more time... onto one less time subtracted from the metronomic drone" I think you got it all figured out so fine!! I really loved this poem! |
||
|
babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
 **pawprints where you feel them...most** ~baby **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
