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ctowen
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0 posted 2005-06-01 03:49 PM


my heart knows grace
and feelings deep
from this voice heard in sleep
so waste not a time away
foresake such chance
for hearts to stray

in this still of words
we feel the flight of
endless birds
releasing our wings to fly
to love each other
and to try

now, a time of recovery
and healing
a time to let go
and embrace the feeling
putting it together
see what we are?
a passion that takes us
oh so far

a love which knows
no distance there
two hearts strong enough to bear
the stormy seas of whatever comes
beyond the freeze
of breeze that numbs

and flowers to the best to be
a love never lost
found and free
here, where we make music, love
a fine tune which we are made of

hush ... be quiet, listen
yes such makes us glisten
like the moon on whitecaps of the sea ....
the souls of nights missing
dreams of love
of you and me


( once more around the floor Dix? .... )


"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."
  

© Copyright 2005 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2005-06-01 04:05 PM




Wow this was awesome...

What a great read !!

Tima

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2 posted 2005-06-01 04:10 PM


Bravo!!!!   Beautiful!!!  Yes please once more!!
~Hugs to you both, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2005-06-01 05:47 PM


Indeed...you  flow nicely together.....hugsssssX2

I came from the mountain
The crust of creation
My whole situtaion-made from clay to stone

BluesSerenade
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4 posted 2005-06-01 06:02 PM


This is such a beautiful rendition you two.
I don't like picking and choosing my favorite lines when it comes to duetting.  
But I gotta tell you I'm loving those whitecaps.  

Thank you for sharing this dance~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2005-06-01 07:20 PM


Brava you two. Damn, this is beautiful writing! Absolutely lovely.
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2005-06-01 10:29 PM


misty........very nice touch of blue
ctowen
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7 posted 2005-06-02 04:25 AM


Thanks everyone for stopping in, reading, and replying ....

      .... it was a pleasure all its own to write once more with Dixie!


           Lori  ~  hmmm .. the whitecaps were Dixie's !!

passing shadows
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8 posted 2005-06-02 11:42 AM


thank you ladies for reading...glad you enjoyed this

Craig, it was a pleasure to write (and dance) with you...we'll duet again soon!

passing shadows
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9 posted 2005-06-03 06:30 AM


wake up...time to do-it again!
babygirlwlove
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10 posted 2005-06-03 01:30 PM


how lovely is that!

great collab...

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

passing shadows
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11 posted 2005-06-06 09:44 AM


will a moderator please delete this?
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2005-06-06 09:51 AM


You two due-et so well together!

~ and may you go around the floor beyond "once more"!


Linda

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13 posted 2005-06-06 02:02 PM


Beautiful!
JamesMichael
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14 posted 2005-06-06 08:18 PM


Like...James
ctowen
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15 posted 2005-06-07 10:51 AM


I want to thank everyone for their time and words ....

     it is much appreciated though Dixie has requested for a deletion ...

     it does bother me to accept such but I leave it up to you as the readers and fellow poets ....


             ... I believed in it, and still satnd by it,
                    otherwise it wasn't meant to be written in the first place ....

             ... I am in your hands ....


                          Thank You ...

catalinamoon
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16 posted 2005-06-07 03:46 PM


Craig and Dixie, this is awesome, you two make a great writing team.
Sandra

ctowen
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17 posted 2005-06-07 06:14 PM


Thank you Sandra ...

    for your presence as well as your wonderful reply ....

           always good to see you!

                                 Craig

passing shadows
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18 posted 2005-06-07 10:13 PM


will a moderator please delete this now? I do not want my words here in this.
Obviously ctowen has not kept his word in saying that he would ask a mod to delete it if it's what I really wanted...

Midnitesun
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Gaia
19 posted 2005-06-08 12:45 PM


I find it sad that such a nice write would be deleted.
So I'm wondering? why should it go, Miss Dixie? when it's such a beautiful poem?
~sigh~
I have friends who are dying...literally,
and any words of beauty, love, friendship can lighten such hearts.
And I am only one reader who has enjoyed the song of this write, and accept it for what is is...a beautiful poetic duet.

passing shadows
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20 posted 2005-06-08 01:36 AM


nevermind
HopeS
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21 posted 2005-06-08 03:21 AM


Wonderful expressed duet , sweet harmony

Hope

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