Open Poetry #35 |
Love Indeed (a Duet with a Dixie chic) |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
my heart knows grace and feelings deep from this voice heard in sleep so waste not a time away foresake such chance for hearts to stray in this still of words we feel the flight of endless birds releasing our wings to fly to love each other and to try now, a time of recovery and healing a time to let go and embrace the feeling putting it together see what we are? a passion that takes us oh so far a love which knows no distance there two hearts strong enough to bear the stormy seas of whatever comes beyond the freeze of breeze that numbs and flowers to the best to be a love never lost found and free here, where we make music, love a fine tune which we are made of hush ... be quiet, listen yes such makes us glisten like the moon on whitecaps of the sea .... the souls of nights missing dreams of love of you and me ( once more around the floor Dix? .... ) "In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living." |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wow this was awesome... What a great read !! Tima |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bravo!!!! Beautiful!!! Yes please once more!! ~Hugs to you both, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Indeed...you flow nicely together.....hugsssssX2 I came from the mountain |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This is such a beautiful rendition you two. I don't like picking and choosing my favorite lines when it comes to duetting. But I gotta tell you I'm loving those whitecaps. Thank you for sharing this dance~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Brava you two. Damn, this is beautiful writing! Absolutely lovely. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
misty........very nice touch of blue |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thanks everyone for stopping in, reading, and replying .... .... it was a pleasure all its own to write once more with Dixie! Lori ~ hmmm .. the whitecaps were Dixie's !! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
thank you ladies for reading...glad you enjoyed this Craig, it was a pleasure to write (and dance) with you...we'll duet again soon! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wake up...time to do-it again! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
how lovely is that! great collab... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
will a moderator please delete this? |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You two due-et so well together! ~ and may you go around the floor beyond "once more"! Linda |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Beautiful! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like...James |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
I want to thank everyone for their time and words .... it is much appreciated though Dixie has requested for a deletion ... it does bother me to accept such but I leave it up to you as the readers and fellow poets .... ... I believed in it, and still satnd by it, otherwise it wasn't meant to be written in the first place .... ... I am in your hands .... Thank You ... |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Craig and Dixie, this is awesome, you two make a great writing team. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Thank you Sandra ... for your presence as well as your wonderful reply .... always good to see you! Craig |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
will a moderator please delete this now? I do not want my words here in this. Obviously ctowen has not kept his word in saying that he would ask a mod to delete it if it's what I really wanted... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I find it sad that such a nice write would be deleted. So I'm wondering? why should it go, Miss Dixie? when it's such a beautiful poem? ~sigh~ I have friends who are dying...literally, and any words of beauty, love, friendship can lighten such hearts. And I am only one reader who has enjoyed the song of this write, and accept it for what is is...a beautiful poetic duet. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nevermind |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Wonderful expressed duet , sweet harmony Hope |
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