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tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent

0 posted 2005-05-31 02:32 AM


You are like a leech;
hanging on to a log.

The log has nothing to give you,
yet you use it to keep you afloat.

Do you not realize that you pull the timber down with you?

As the sounds of the falls near, you only think of yourself and go to safety.

As I plummit towards my rocky grave.

[This message has been edited by tearsoflove13762 (05-31-2005 05:09 PM).]

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Soulfisher
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1 posted 2005-05-31 04:33 AM


Laura you definitly have a unique way of saying you suck that craetes some great imagery backed by examples.
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2 posted 2005-05-31 09:59 AM


Laura, you relay a good image here


(may be a good idea to change the title to the correct spelling - leech)

adagio
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3 posted 2005-05-31 04:04 PM


OW!
That's gotta hurt.

tearsoflove13762
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Texas.. and yes i have an accent
4 posted 2005-06-28 11:59 PM


thanks for the comments~ i usually dont venture out of teen poetry~

love will make you beautiful

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