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ice
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0 posted 2005-05-29 06:29 AM


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I could say:

The day scent of your skin is as sweet
As Heliotrope-laced with Hesperus, and like
Those flowers (always) April-shower, fresh.

And at night, your essence is saccharine
Like summer stocks that rise
A perfume headiness,
As does the tuberose emit
In moon-beam light.

But I wont for I

Need/must word  you truth,
And state your fragrance takes
A form like these, but
Spreads a unique taste...

When it passes over my lips.

Because no other flower,
In the universe, of pheromones
Sheds same, your fair detect...

...that in a blindfold check

That made a lovely line
Of all women found on earth,
Holding every different flower;

Offering their blooms and necks,
In a kind of nuzzle test....

I could easy pick you out from all the rest.
      
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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-05-29 07:14 AM


Absolutely delightful, dear Ford!

And you so lovingly described the uniqueness of her ... and all of us must know of this wonder of being unique under this sky. (at least SOMEONE knows of us too!)

Love, Margherita

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-05-29 07:37 AM



Then say it, man!

This had old age fragrance
lined through the lace
of her, Ford.

It is a keeper.

And not with a light on it, no...
but the soft flame of a candle.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Martie
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3 posted 2005-05-29 10:14 AM


Wonderfully loving!
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2005-05-29 10:31 AM


Lucky be she of whom you write!

A man who appreciates the uniqueness and specialness of his woman, is a man who is indeed, a precious rose himself.  Flowers


Linda

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5 posted 2005-05-29 11:57 AM


Soft and tender as a lover's caress.
Much loved is this one Ford.
Well done.
Hugs~Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

timothysangel1973
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6 posted 2005-05-29 12:17 PM


Wonderful write Ice
Susan
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7 posted 2005-05-29 01:25 PM


delightful -

S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Aleta
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8 posted 2005-05-29 02:20 PM


To make a woman feel special amidst a rose garden is a gift indeed.  Lovely write.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2005-05-29 05:21 PM


very romantic, this one
ice
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10 posted 2005-05-29 06:30 PM


Thank you, poet friends....

Your replies tell me that you understand...
and that is very important to me

I must admit I have been reading the master of romance poetry..imho....Neruda

Ahhh yes, Pablo

"The grain grew high in its harvest of you,
in good time the flour swelled;
as the dough rose, doubling your breasts,
my love was the coal waiting ready in the earth." (sonnet X111)

Again,  Thank You

---------ice
   ><>

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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11 posted 2005-05-29 06:33 PM


This is beautiful Ford.
Enjoyed the read,the images it gives.

:-)

<^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world

iliana
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12 posted 2005-05-31 12:06 PM


Golly!  This is special!   ....jo
LeeJ
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13 posted 2005-05-31 07:45 AM


Ford, you and Pablo, ROCK

This was entising...soft, elegant...and most of all, understanding the woman in every one of us....

Enjoyed!

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2005-05-31 08:55 AM






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