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| Open Poetry #35 |
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A Kind Of Nuzzle Test |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
I could say: The day scent of your skin is as sweet As Heliotrope-laced with Hesperus, and like Those flowers (always) April-shower, fresh. And at night, your essence is saccharine Like summer stocks that rise A perfume headiness, As does the tuberose emit In moon-beam light. But I wont for I Need/must word you truth, And state your fragrance takes A form like these, but Spreads a unique taste... When it passes over my lips. Because no other flower, In the universe, of pheromones Sheds same, your fair detect... ...that in a blindfold check That made a lovely line Of all women found on earth, Holding every different flower; Offering their blooms and necks, In a kind of nuzzle test.... I could easy pick you out from all the rest. [This message has been edited by ice (05-29-2005 07:55 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Absolutely delightful, dear Ford! And you so lovingly described the uniqueness of her ... and all of us must know of this wonder of being unique under this sky. (at least SOMEONE knows of us too!) Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Then say it, man! This had old age fragrance lined through the lace of her, Ford. It is a keeper. And not with a light on it, no... but the soft flame of a candle. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wonderfully loving! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lucky be she of whom you write! A man who appreciates the uniqueness and specialness of his woman, is a man who is indeed, a precious rose himself.   Linda |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Soft and tender as a lover's caress. Much loved is this one Ford. Well done. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wonderful write Ice |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
delightful -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Aleta Member
since 2005-04-17
Posts 102Louisiana |
To make a woman feel special amidst a rose garden is a gift indeed. Lovely write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very romantic, this one |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thank you, poet friends.... Your replies tell me that you understand... and that is very important to me I must admit I have been reading the master of romance poetry..imho....Neruda Ahhh yes, Pablo "The grain grew high in its harvest of you, in good time the flour swelled; as the dough rose, doubling your breasts, my love was the coal waiting ready in the earth." (sonnet X111) Again, Thank You ---------ice ><> |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
This is beautiful Ford. Enjoyed the read,the images it gives. :-) <^^> Today the pond....Tomorrow the world |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Golly! This is special! ....jo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ford, you and Pablo, ROCK This was entising...soft, elegant...and most of all, understanding the woman in every one of us.... Enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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