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timothysangel1973
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0 posted 2005-05-29 02:22 AM


Standing in wait
these memories
I promised
to forget

Yet the ache
deep inside
reminds me
that I haven't
let go
yet

Weary, this heart
of mine
Twisting pain
tightly wrapping
vines

Senses tickled
by yesterdays
gone by and by
Still
they linger
and leave
me dry

My mind screams
no more
yet the chords
don't chime along

All this,
and that,
and choices
gone wrong

My chin
lives on my shoulder
looking back
trying to see

What it was
that I loved
when I thought
I really knew
me

Can't say
that I'm lost
when I don't
know my
direction

I'm basically
just stuck
in this
cloud
of regretted
reflection


I may hate myself in the morning - but I'm gonna love you tonight
-Lee Ann Womack

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2005-05-29 02:26 AM


Nice writing...James
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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2 posted 2005-05-29 02:30 AM


We all go through pauses and reflections.  You say this well.  
Margherita
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3 posted 2005-05-29 09:17 AM


quote:
What it was
that I loved
when I thought
I really knew
me

Can't say
that I'm lost
when I don't
know my
direction

I'm basically
just stuck
in this
cloud
of regretted
reflection




Love these ponderings of yours. In meditation answers find it easier to manifest.

Love, Margherita

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2005-05-29 11:01 AM


"All this,
and that,
and choices
gone wrong"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"What it was
that I loved
when I thought
I really knew
me"

oh yesss...very well done

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-05-29 05:16 PM


feeling this one
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