Open Poetry #35 |
Storm |
Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
She once promissed to think of me when it rains Response and memories that are absent are vain Silence chokes till flash of light and the thunder rolls, what a sight from window view skyline brillant blue Green towers over kind thoughts cover Forgotten tears pitter patter rain drops fall splitter splatter Will she remember? Will I kiss her? |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Very understanding piece of emotional release .... yes Brad absence does make the heart grow fonder Hope |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wistful longing ~ and remembrances. I believe that she does remember. You sound hard to forget... EA |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm betting she loves the rain... enjoyed this very much |
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Brad_Smith Member
since 2004-01-09
Posts 70Dallas, Texas |
Thanks for the thoughts yall! |
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