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Open Poetry #35
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Brad_Smith
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0 posted 2005-06-01 03:30 AM


She once promissed to think of me when it rains
Response and memories that are absent are vain
Silence chokes till flash of light
and the thunder rolls, what a sight

from window view
skyline brillant blue
Green towers over
kind thoughts cover

Forgotten tears pitter patter
rain drops fall splitter splatter
Will she remember?
Will I kiss her?
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HopeS
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1 posted 2005-06-01 03:35 AM

Very understanding piece of emotional release .... yes Brad absence does make the heart grow fonder

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2 posted 2005-06-01 08:36 AM

Wistful longing ~ and remembrances.

I believe that she does remember. You sound hard to forget...


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3 posted 2005-06-01 10:01 AM

I'm betting she loves the rain...
enjoyed this very much
Brad_Smith
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4 posted 2005-06-01 08:05 PM

Thanks for the thoughts yall!
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