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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I envy it - that cool quiet - this - the ordered sheltering the tint denying laughter's mourn as philosophers are born (and slain) as easily as us fingers trace too thoughtlessly upon the spine pages deign the yellowing as Sophia cries again - just a pause of entering a bas-relief of life, we seek unexpected choirings angels joyous of the fall nuns are singing worship dreams Latin is the bellows of beads in count of love received and fingers fly to soothe the dove fluttering in constancy beneath beneath the robes of trust aching to be born of arch of a woman on her back fevered in the thrust. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you... for this.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I used to feel so happy when folks understood my stuff. I confess that now, it sometimes makes me sad when ya'll do. That means you KNOW. and nod, I chose a mature metphor, but it seemed to be the only one that would do. Thanks Kari, for understanding. love ya lady  I should go sleep. (cross your fingers)  and love to all |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A very well written piece my old friend! adagio |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hope you're awake now, Karen, because I'm calling you on this one! Pick up your phone, lady! lol I think I understand but want to make sure. I do love to ponder your equisite writing. ....jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
your poetry take me to places, i've never been to and make me feel what i've never felt before. Thank you M'lady Serenity. Mxx  "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
A wonderful write from you should NEVER surprise me because you have a voice in you that is beyond explanation. I adore your muse, and your pen. And? Sometimes I don't know what you are talking about, but I read it anyway because? I just love the part of you that makes it's way onto paper. Love ya sista Tima |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
pages deign the yellowing as Sophia cries again - just a pause of entering a bas-relief of life, we seek ah, ye lovely hermeticist  ever seeking r |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling @ Raph with hugs... *winks* thank you |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
we're sorry, but your path cannot be completed. please hang up, or try your path again. we're sorry, but your...click @&$%@&% @%$& sigh... |
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