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Twilight Picnic |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Close of day gathers me Into some sound rhyme Lush texture where shadows collect And triplets dye the light Falling into purple hush Casting wild infinity to sea Ohhh, the incessant surf Tugging shards of prophesy Like the closing eyes of a wish Holding warm flowing mesh A thing of beauty Unaltered or learned Feeling your anguish swell beneath my breast In you, I have touched the nuclei of passion Tomorrow becomes a neon sign Sighs evoking mere moments in time Soft Profound Reverence Everlasting Larger then we could bear Yet know of it’s life Longing for the music That a willing God is near Lost inside you, is that ok? [This message has been edited by LeeJ (02-24-2005 10:07 AM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmmmm - sounds like a lovely place to be lost in - beautifully written -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Longing for the music That a willing God is near" I agree with Susan. Great write. JL  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
God certainly is in someone who can write so awesome-Lee!  Love & God's Twilight, Linda |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much, Lee... your images are fantastic! *S* |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Fantastic. What a spread you set lady. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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