Open Poetry #35 |
A Spiders Web |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
A Spiders Web I watched a spider spin a web The rhythm was a flow and ebb And morning hung the web with dew That made a magic of the view It fluttered in the breeze a might That struck illusion with the sight A structured beauty in its flare But who would think of danger there? Each item is a prop on stage You learn this with the sage of age To see the meanings of each prop Will tell you sure to go or stop I beg you think about each stride Even words can start a tide And catch you in a rivers flow Until you cannot stop the go Judge each stage of life you see And store it like a honeybee |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
profound wisdom in your words this morning Sey, I needed them much sir. Well done. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well sir, I'm not sipping this one, more so, gobbling it up for safe keeping...delightful read and friendship song today Sy, thank you. Hugs and smiles |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
....Saved so fast it'd make a spider spin! I bow to you, dear Venerable One. This truly was a piece of poetic and sage poetry! You spin magic with your words, Sir Sigh! EA |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Well I popped in hoping to find something uplifting, and I certainly did. As a matter of fact, what I found here was doubly wonderful. A beautifully flowing poem from you ... plus the perfect measure of positive, sound advice and wisdom. Very much enjoyed this Sy. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What wonderful wisdom... and you wrote it beautifully! *S* |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
As always it's a real pleasure to read your poetry. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You learn this with the sage of age To see the meanings of each prop Wonderful poem Sy, loved every good thought you wrote here. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Wise words, sir Sy! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AHA! Props... the world IS but a stage... May I be Juliet to your Romeo? At least in Acts I and II? |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sy,The morning dew, a spider's web, and you. The webster, weaving words to ensnare and engage the minds, of those of us who follow you. Thank you for an excellent read, marty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful Sy |
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