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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-05-26 09:20 PM

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Give me a moment, Sir,
let my supplication be seen
only by you, for
I kneel, weak and tired, before you,
in your light,
in your light.

Let me weep, this,
a woman’s weakness, surely,
though over generations of time,
I have seen man shed
quiet runnels of wet liquid,
as he denied any remorse, nor requested
audience of one…
in Your image.

Let me hide in your forests,
as you sculpt once again this
new form into mold of genesis, let me
wither before rebirth, let me…

let me…

be.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2005-05-26 09:25 PM

Beautiful thoughts KJ...humbling, but oh
so sweet a write it is.

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

2 posted 2005-05-26 09:25 PM

Powerfully written, Sunshine! Whew! Such sweet intensity!

miscee

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-05-26 09:48 PM

Beautiful..Humble..Uplifting.
Perfectly penned dear lady~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2005-05-26 11:10 PM

beautifully penned, er, if you get a response would ya mind putting in a good word for me?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-05-27 06:06 AM

stunning!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2005-05-27 08:53 AM

Thank you, dear lady......

If ever there were a morning when I needed a quiet reassurance of the world's rightness, this is that morning....and in the first thing I've read, here it is.

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______________Ratleader______________

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-05-27 09:03 AM

Sunshine,
Now that is a ray of sunshine. Excellent

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2005-05-27 09:35 AM

Karilea~

Quiet applause for something SO LOVELY~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email [email protected]

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

9 posted 2005-05-27 09:55 AM

Absolutely beautiful penning Momma K. Lovely this, lovely you!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

10 posted 2005-05-27 10:08 AM

Exquisite !!

Hugs, Chrislane

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2005-05-27 10:22 AM

you are amazing

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2005-05-27 08:56 PM

"Let me hide in your forests,
as you sculpt once again this
new form into mold of genesis, let me
wither before rebirth, let me…

let me…

be."

Sissie...feeling this!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

13 posted 2005-05-27 09:46 PM

awesome

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

14 posted 2005-05-31 03:06 PM

Incredibly lovely!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

15 posted 2005-05-31 03:10 PM

Pretty, pretty, poetry~

adagio
Member

since 2005-03-19

Posts 449
Marrero, La.

16 posted 2005-05-31 04:20 PM

This could indeed be a prayer

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