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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2005-05-26 06:26 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

My Uncle is dying of cancer
and only has about a month
to live.Each time I visit
him I walk away feeling so
depressed at what I see.

* * *

This place is so depressing
It is filled with hollow eyes
Mouths agape as they lay sleeping
It looks as though they're catching flies

Old people shuffle down the hall
It's such a sad and sorry sight
They have the same destination
As they wait for heaven's flight

As I sit down here beside you
Within your own world you stray
I wonder if you really know me
As I think of what to say

Poison courses through your body
At such a very rapid rate
If only you heeded the warnings
But now it's too little, too late

Your mind is so confused
And you don't know which day or year
Your time is running out
For the end is drawing near

I hate to see you suffer
And I hope your pain won't last
Each moment spent with you is precious
In stone, your fate has been cast

You still have your sense of humour
And that helps to see you through
I don't look forward to your passing
It won't be the same without you

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2005 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-26 11:03 PM


oh Sue, my heart goes out to you and your uncle...

you are both in my prayers

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-05-26 11:06 PM


Suetang
It is the way of life.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
3 posted 2005-05-26 11:13 PM



I send my prayers for peace and release for your uncle to help ease his suffering. It is also painful for loved ones such as yourself, to watch helplessly as they drift away.

A very moving poem.

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
4 posted 2005-05-27 01:07 AM


Thank you all for your kindness.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2005-05-27 01:42 AM


Very soft writing...James
SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2005-05-28 12:41 PM


Awwww Sue, I am so sorry.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
7 posted 2005-05-28 02:48 AM


Oh, Sue, I am so sorry to hear this.  You have expressed your feelings so well....*hugs*....jo
Goldenrose
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8 posted 2005-05-28 05:35 AM


A difficult poem to write Sue...but you wrote it well...i am sure that his memory will be with you always..

Goldenrose.

Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
9 posted 2005-05-28 06:22 PM


Thank you all for your kindness and sincerity.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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