Open Poetry #35 |
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It Won't Be The Same Without You |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Josephine Wall * * * My Uncle is dying of cancer and only has about a month to live.Each time I visit him I walk away feeling so depressed at what I see. * * * This place is so depressing It is filled with hollow eyes Mouths agape as they lay sleeping It looks as though they're catching flies Old people shuffle down the hall It's such a sad and sorry sight They have the same destination As they wait for heaven's flight As I sit down here beside you Within your own world you stray I wonder if you really know me As I think of what to say Poison courses through your body At such a very rapid rate If only you heeded the warnings But now it's too little, too late Your mind is so confused And you don't know which day or year Your time is running out For the end is drawing near I hate to see you suffer And I hope your pain won't last Each moment spent with you is precious In stone, your fate has been cast You still have your sense of humour And that helps to see you through I don't look forward to your passing It won't be the same without you I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Sue, my heart goes out to you and your uncle... you are both in my prayers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang It is the way of life. ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I send my prayers for peace and release for your uncle to help ease his suffering. It is also painful for loved ones such as yourself, to watch helplessly as they drift away. A very moving poem. Love & Eternal Light, Linda |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kindness. Take care.....Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very soft writing...James |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Awwww Sue, I am so sorry. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Oh, Sue, I am so sorry to hear this. You have expressed your feelings so well....*hugs*....jo |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A difficult poem to write Sue...but you wrote it well...i am sure that his memory will be with you always.. Goldenrose. Desire for nothing except desirelessness,hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes, want nothing and you will have everything.avatar Meher Baba. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Thank you all for your kindness and sincerity. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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