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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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the village of echoes where the quiet men wander they wear the black colors and pretend to be night only the metal of them is seen for moments before the dawn when a suspicious sun opens her window slice and touches the sounds of wet grass bowing and whispered trees chanting the kata songs they are unison ununited as the hair of warriors steeds when galloped to battles on the plains of barco and the maidens pray with laughter ______________ dark (scribblenote: kanan ends up in malibu, the back way..late at night it is surreal) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very descriptive well done |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this so reminded me of the last samurai, loved that movie... and your poem even more... Hello and Good Morning, good to see you, was thinking of you last night, when the news was reporting the killer whales gathering for the grey whale migration along the coast out there your way...have you seen them? They had some exceptional shots.... Happy Day to ya and thanks so much for sharing. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
your lines and visions wisk me into the surreal - much enjoyed this d-  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Agoura Hills ... canyon and adobe homes... dirt roads shifting under summer winds and pinyons talk to me... ~*~ Thank you for taking me back... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"before the dawn when a suspicious sun opens her window slice and touches the sounds of wet grass bowing and whispered trees" enjoyed this  |
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youcan'tseeme Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 88 |
the excpert from SEA also struck me Very much enjoyed thank you |
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Cloud 9 Senior Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 980Ca |
Me too. (what SEA quoted) Loved that part. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
With your mind's eye you see beyond the real and the imagery and atmosphere you share is indeed very captivating. Love, Margherita |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know that road, DS..it is beautiful in the daytime too. Enjoyed it much, through your eyes!  [This message has been edited by Martie (05-28-2005 07:29 PM).] |
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