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CastleGuard
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Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2005-05-26 04:29 PM



Dancing on a dream's edge
I search the key of your heart —
Will it let me in - or out?

CG

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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
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Marrero, La.
1 posted 2005-05-26 04:33 PM


Curious? of course!
Very much enjoyed
adagio

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2005-05-26 04:37 PM



CG

Key

Heart Shell

EA


CastleGuard
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3 posted 2005-05-26 04:51 PM



adagio - thank you.

Linda....that was quick.....LOL!!
Much enjoyed the ..um...smile..

CG

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2005-05-26 05:09 PM


Oooh I wonder?
Excellent write!
Hugs~Nancy

Life is one great big canvas;
throw all the paint on it you can.
                    -Danny Kaye

youcan'tseeme
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5 posted 2005-05-26 05:30 PM


'dancing on a dream's edge'... i really like that

sweet

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2005-05-26 06:31 PM


So few words, yet much to ponder.

Take care....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2005-05-27 12:56 PM


Well, I have one with the latest technology,
no longer uses the key, but a "SECRET CODE" that you type in to enter...
I believe you know it...
and you have used it  

~ARH


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
Posts 760
Alberta, Canada
8 posted 2005-05-27 06:50 PM



Thank you.

ARH - a Lady's "SECRET CODE" is never truly / fully deciphered...a veil of mystique...(again)...

CG

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