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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-05-25 07:48 AM


A brace of flowers

I picked a bouquet from a field
A palettes odor and colors yield
And placed it in a vase of dew
To brighten up my windows view

And low the sun drew shadows fall
A brace of nuance on my wall
That danced within the breeze that past
In colored hews that merged in last

And fascination held my mind
A revel of a naive kind
And spirit took my heart in bloom
And I was caught within its loom

In the moment it was done
The world and I became as one
And I was set a rainbows path
A baptismal and bath

The treasure of my rainbows end
Was naught but sun and flowers blend

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2005-05-25 07:55 AM


sounds like a mighty fine treasure to me Sy

good morning!

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-05-25 07:59 AM


passing,
Thank you love,

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3 posted 2005-05-25 08:02 AM


ultimate embrace of love...we're on the same wave length this morning my friend

Hello, good morning, good to read you


Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2005-05-25 08:09 AM


LeeJ
Missed you my sweet. Good morning to you.

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5 posted 2005-05-25 09:31 AM



And low the sun drew shadows fall
A brace of nuance on my wall
That danced within the breeze that past
In colored hews that merged in last

And fascination held my mind
A revel of a naive kind
And spirit took my heart in bloom
And I was caught within its loom

~*~

Aha...

crystals and dreamcatchers,
m'friend

that is what I saw
on your wall of scene...






Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2005-05-25 09:38 AM


Sunshine
I'm glad you saw what I saw.

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2005-05-25 11:00 AM


Mr. T., you are beautiful ~ and very special!

May your spirit heart forever bloom!

Love & Light,
EA



Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2005-05-25 11:02 AM


Earth Angel
Thats funny I was just going to say that about you.

Enchantress
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9 posted 2005-05-25 03:55 PM


"In the moment it was done
The world and I became as one
And I was set a rainbows path
A baptismal and bath

The treasure of my rainbows end
Was naught but sun and flowers blend"

How very very beautiful Sy!
I'm a little late..but, I'm here!
Sending smiles and hugs your way.

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2005-05-25 04:19 PM


Nancy,
I did miss you.

Martie
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11 posted 2005-05-25 04:48 PM


Ahhh, Sy....you know I love this one!!  
Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2005-05-25 05:56 PM


Martie
You are a love.

adagio
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13 posted 2005-05-25 07:15 PM


Another piece of beautifull writing my friend. Does it come easy for you or do you have to re-write them four or five times like I do to get it the way you want it?

Just a little jelous of you overflowing talent.
adagio

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2005-05-25 08:52 PM


adagio
Sometimes I get it the first time and sometimes I rewrite it. It depends.

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