Open Poetry #35 |
metalman handstands |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I always did prefer the metal sounds to the whimpering of bending wood when the winds came to do their have to things and the woman of brass that steps high her hem when she wants to climb the trees above the clouds over the water woman that just seeps and looks at the sky and wishes her dreams had bigger hands than her fear feet had fingers so now I draw the cards from a deck of plenty and sort the queens from jokers to stack the deck in favor of a woman without a plastic nametag _______________ dark (scribblenote: measuring maturity |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"so now I draw the cards from a deck of plenty and sort the queens from jokers" enjoyed the read.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An honest hand receives the largest pot ~*~ at least, that's what you made me think. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, I am a water woman ... in my element the metallic sounds are softened and ... I hear the sound of your core ... And it's a tender sound ... of fused metal. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks to you for the eyes here and margherita...waterwoman is nice especially when metal is playing in the ripples..thanks for the prospective |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
(edited by moderator-for inappropriate comments) [This message has been edited by SEA (05-26-2005 08:45 AM).] |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
beatiful job mixing the metphores and evoking a prescribed feeling. you took me there. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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