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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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The Rabbi walked amidst the crowd it's written he asked "who touched me?" Someone from behind in plea dared to touch his gown. Someone walked behind me too Someone placed a hand on me and I felt myself receive a life in spite of me... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Although this has little to do.. Before I read this, I was discussing in my head the word "spite".. Oh, and I love the poem.  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
my second choice of title was: written in henna ephemeral at best hugs you  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
..for better days. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
kewl karen I do love the veil outfit you have been wearing lately |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The Rabbi then said: "Daughter, your faith has healed you" and similarly you may say: "In spite of me and in spite of you, this life is a blessing". Touched ... Love, Margherita |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Sometimes it seems those of us who need it most have a slight resistance to touch.... An attempt to do it alone?... A touch of misplaced independence?... Questions, unasked go unanswered.. And still we seek... best to you, marty jo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and you are a blessing  mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Read this early this morning... off and on throughout the day... I think I would enjoy an invisible someone tugging at my skirts... [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-24-2005 07:20 PM).] |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Somehow, we do receive the touch we need, don't we? Excellent! TD |
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Canuckster Member
since 2002-01-09
Posts 285New Mexico, USA |
There are those who seek life and find it, but how true that often life finds us unawares. never try to teach a pig to sing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
incredible |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
your amazing/pip/Forum92/HTML/002921.html |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
gentle but powerful write! Short, but full of meaning...I think I'll just tuck this under my arm and walk toward the library. Great to read your writing again, serenity. miscellanea |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Someone placed a hand on me and I felt myself receive a life in spite of me..." ~ So often in life, it is ourself who stands in the way of our own healing. Linda |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
powerful writing K. I really want to care, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Karen, an inspired piece of writing enjoyed much adagio |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
argh |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
human souls yearning humanity surviving quiet timeless ways |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hey, K-ladyoo.....your soul speaks and we are the beneficiaries in so many ways. I read all the comments above mine and I agree with them all. .....jo |
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