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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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0 posted 2005-05-23 11:52 PM

empty, she sits in rock of chair
her floral dress in tease of air
her trembling hand just resting there
with cigarette
gossamer

within the high lamp of sun
her eyes peg what’s come undone
the liken state of myrmidon
her footless chapters on the run

and in creep of grey and white
her verse is of a violent write
that she may not sight this night
birth of fledged full moon-light.

re-post: 032104

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Martie

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California

1 posted 2005-05-24 12:08 PM

Maree

I'm glad you reposted this...it is full, of you, and that's amazing!

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2005-05-24 03:16 AM

I like this one.

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

3 posted 2005-05-24 08:53 AM

yes, I like this one too!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

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Florida

4 posted 2005-05-24 09:01 AM

"within the high lamp of sun
her eyes peg what’s come undone"

outstanding lines!!

had to skip over to dictionary.com for this:

myrmidon: A faithful follower who carries out orders without question.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-05-26 08:44 AM

really enjoyed this one, like Susan, I to, had need for a dictionary, but I like that, the challenge of this poem, for me...it spoke volumns...thank you

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-05-26 08:47 AM

quote:
...her verse is of a violent write
that she may not sight this night
birth of fledged full moon-light.

Clouds are hiding my moon too, little one...
and when you want the muse to come...
it's a little bit hard,
through the gray!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

7 posted 2005-05-26 09:00 AM

"within the high lamp of sun"

~ That line just popped out at me and will be with me forever!

Enjoyed your poem and appreciate the poetic grace with which it was written.

Love & Light,
EA

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2005-05-26 10:07 AM

glad your reposted

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2005-05-26 10:22 AM

her footless chapters on the run

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Yanno, this rocks dontcha??

BELLA

I really want to care,
I want to feel something,
let me dig a little deeper
nah, still nothing~
my give a DAMN is busted. Jodee

vandana

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USA

10 posted 2005-05-26 10:34 AM

good read

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2005-05-26 04:32 PM

Hey everyone, thank YOU all so very much for stopping by and for your wondermous replies...
The way i was feelin Monday, it begged to be re-posted heh.. so thank you, ya all da best.

Maree

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

12 posted 2005-05-26 11:16 PM

hugs

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

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13 posted 2005-05-27 04:57 AM

Thanks Bello.... miss YOU!

mxx

"we all have wings, but some of us don't know why"

Michael Hutchence (INXS)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

14 posted 2005-05-28 12:57 PM

The voyage out has healing effects.

The moon's power filters through the grey ... if we let it happen.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

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