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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2005-05-23 08:00 AM



The wind blows..
I don't feel it

Time marches on..
I don't feel it

Sun shines bright in my face..
I don't feel it

Words of encouragement are offered..
I don't feel it

My heart shuts away..
I don't feel it

Emotions hide deep..
I don't feel it

I am alone, even in a crowded room..
I don't feel it

A tear runs along my cheek..
I don't feel it

Arms hold me tight..
I don't feel it

Nothing finds me anymore, it's all gone..
I felt it


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1 posted 2005-05-23 08:03 AM


It's about time you find your way back to the Blue Pages..
I've been waiting too long for another write from you.

This is completely up to your typically great standards.

I loved it.

I'm drowning, choking
   Falling deeper into this
   Black hole we call living
...Fates Warning

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2 posted 2005-05-23 01:38 PM


blue? cool. thanks for the kind words doll

If home is where the heart is,,,,,I guess the corner bar is where the mind wanders off to

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