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secretlife
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since 2002-07-30
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Grean Earth ,,,

0 posted 2005-05-22 04:35 PM


Loving but feels lost
Kissing and imaging someone else
suddenly I see my self standing alone in the desert
Waiting for a small droplet of water
Hearing my breaths and beats hardly find a way to know is it a true love
Lost that a feeling I get whenever I kiss him
Lost and don’t know what is true and false
Knowing that I have a passion but Lost to know for whom
Lost


Secretlife
Easy come, Easy go

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You Is One...

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adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
1 posted 2005-05-22 05:00 PM


Secretlife, "Kissing and imagining someone else"? That quite an image! I think it's a fantacy many people have. Any way I enjoyed the write.
adagio

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2005-05-22 05:50 PM


I relate to that feeling

enjoyed the write

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