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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2005-05-22 11:44 AM



Whirling in a symphony of ache
Fever exhaled in groan of timber beams
The seeming give of inner brace esteems

Estranged the landscapes of your skin
Settle me familiar in scent and thought

Your chest beats hard against my hand
Lifting senses understand the gathering
In dilated sight our eyes distill the light

Poised together sharing one breath
Most intimate in its silence

Relating in a world absent of bounds
Absent of woes in the throws of sounds
Autumn crisps the air in summer passion

Two views together sculpt in panoramic fashion
Feelings correlate caught in temperate blush  

Returning to the rib from whence it came
Making music of raw emotional strings
Enrapt that friendship sings the blessing of rain

To mouth the purpose we contain
And swallows us in echoes of certain song

Copyright Kkh 05/22/05

© Copyright 2005 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2005-05-22 02:57 PM


quote:
Poised together sharing one breath
Most intimate in its silence




The sounds of this oneness are beautiful!

Again I am amazed by the treasure of words you have.

Love, Margherita

adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
2 posted 2005-05-22 05:25 PM


I found it very beautifull and enjoyed it
adagio

Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2005-05-22 05:41 PM


TD

I really liked your title, and the way it related to the poem.  As always, you are amazing!  

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2005-05-22 05:45 PM


beautiful

I always enjoy you

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