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To be Cognizant
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To be Cognizant |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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To be Cognizant I strode within a valley’s green But could not comprehend the scene It touched me in an ethereal sense The smell of grass its recompense It offered me a moment’s clause A moments peace a moments pause An oasis this world of rue A place to stay within the blue But green is but a symbols guide An island in the flow of tide A moment’s stay to catch your breath A place to breathe before your death Many a valley caught my eye Many a valley brought a sigh But in the passage come to view The best of all would be of you You are the valley I would stay Stay forever and a day. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Sigh . . . yes, lovely- S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan Thank you dear and have a wonderful Sunday. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh my....stunningly beautiful Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you love. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...green is but a symbols guide An island in the flow of tide A moment’s stay to catch your breath A place to breathe before your death ~*~ Find peace in the green, Sy... its color can vary so much, in some many wonderful ways... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Thank you love.  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy So beautiful and loving!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Thank you sweety.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In that particular valley of love lies life's essence. Dear Seymour, I admire you for the lightness and beauty in all your poems, the music is always there, as is your wisdom! Love and hugs. Have a beautiful Sunday ... evening I guess! Margherita |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A very thoughtfull piece! Thanks for bringing us to that place. adagio  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Thank you dear and love and hugs back. adagio Thank you for going. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
*tears* Everything I wish I'd said... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is such a sweet heart filled peace. I love it!!!! Kristabell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity,  Kristabell, Thank you for the read and comment. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is so very lovely, Seymour... it's going into my library. *S* I hope Isabel's knee is better... please give her a hug for me!!! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern I will and thank you. |
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