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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2005-02-22 08:11 PM

       Star

Through the keyhole that is
      a star it seems so bright, so rare,
           everything lives in shimmerblue on
                 the other side of time and space,
                       so bright it’s hard to understand
                           there's darkness over there too,

and I'll never forget how
      the other eye looked out
             at me, watching, watching.....

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2005-02-22 09:28 PM

Your writing keeps getting better and better Ed. I wish mine would. hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2005-02-22 09:31 PM

watching watching

kind of haunting to think there may not be the starry starry night of our dreamtime slumbering

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-02-22 10:53 PM

I read this as looking into the eyes of another...
such is that cosmos...amazing.
TD

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2005-02-22 11:14 PM

Ed...I love the mysterious feel to this...really interesting and well done. Wish I had a keyhole with a star behind it...hmmmm, maybe I do!!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-02-23 04:29 AM

cool write

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2005-02-23 01:48 PM

When you season your incredible images with a touch of intrigue... the result is absolutely delicious. *S*

I agree with Nightshade.... you work keeps getting better and better.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2005-02-23 01:58 PM

watching, ever watching...
Yes Ed, fine writing..

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-02-23 02:03 PM

Yes - over there - darkness and light -

enjoyed this - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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