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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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yes I hear it in your songs that whisper that waits to shout from your lips or to run from your pen to parchment barefoot hurried now that you have stood there at the window of woman and realized you need more than just one man's hands to hold the gypsy of your love I hear you at the evening when you beckon me with dreams and wait in the shadows of your secret harbor for my long ship’s abrasion for my thought vikings to ravish the virgin meadows of your fiords and leave them blushingly bloomed with the damp sighs of evening and irrigated in shimmer songed dawns yes I hear the moan voices of your polysinsuel women there in the body of one the lovely prison of one wanting to be free as the leaves to scatter on demon grounds _______________ dark |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my leaves stay and flow within, and yet, there is more then great love, to place before the feet of man it is that moon glow of mist which waits in mind richness.... and there we are all connected to some diverse offspring of thoughts wonder mood of love amazing write my friend...incredible! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms leej..you are a blessing in a ladygown thank you |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
free as those leaves they are like that aren't they? little fluesy leaves toying with the big old crazy biker man again........ mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm make me a leaf so i could have my way with you over and over again shove my prints on your big ole engine and ruin you for the rest of them |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
yes I hear it in your songs ~*~ Weaves both ways, Sir... a delight to read. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"yes I hear it in your songs that whisper that waits to shout from your lips or to run from your pen to parchment barefoot hurried" beautiful, soft as well as sensual... always a pleasure to read....  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
wish I could think of something beautiful to say - something poetic and smart - all I can say is that you see things with incredible vision and can lay them out so beautifully in your words - you are a special man D -  SIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "yes I hear the moan voices of your polysinsuel women there in the body of one the lovely prison of one" I belive you  |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
incendiary, her gypsy love flickers bold on the breeze of him. Indigo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
My spirit will rise |
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