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truth forever must speak
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truth forever must speak |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
my heart so heavy how can it be so full of love for one who just took from me i thought these eyes would never shed another tear from all the pain the shame the fear i long for him in my arms knowing of his false charms my right hand feels warmth as one unseen calms these waves of emotion giving visions of serene for now i allow myself to go further back my hand is held no trust do i lack the light turns to dark on the city below nothing is stirring not even a shadow high as an eagle i fly through the air not realizing what the dark is about to bare trees as giants with animal forms walk in cease of the storms i was taken back to a giant cage in the sky where there was more than you nor I ships in the sky circles of light short and tall walk invisable to most with sight there in the trees they whisper in the breeze i see ones begging for life down on their knees pits of fire she sits by its side not knowing their evil they hide secret societies all around spreading lies with sin screams of truth no one hears a sound the ground is moving shaking with disgust the sea is angry from all the mistrust his thunder is loud is storm is strong his lightning strikes deep from all their wrong eyes are blind even when words are more than kind man who plays god has gone to far as once before when they came from their star worlds not meant to be this close together chaos terror stormy weather man has fallen we can no longer be meek truth is why she wasnt allowed to speak i see them dancing not saying a sound showing me whats sacred and whats bound no more chains no more ties truth speaks or life forever dies My spirit will rise above the sea~ There will be no drowning of my soul or me~ My spirit will rise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES I think I agree with what you said. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Wow what a powerful poem. You had short breaks, and I liked you you used them too... -JUju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Stunning...A powerful vision filled with both passion and pain...wonderful writing... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcia~ No one ever said all of the visions would be pretty ones ... there are great truths to be unveiled, if only we take (MAKE) the time to seek~ *Huglets* to you dear seeker~  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
So true. Nice write. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this has a mystic ancient feel to it - like spirits rising and speaking a warning, reminding us of a time when man and mother earth knew one another - I like it -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
i see them dancing not saying a sound showing me whats sacred and whats bound no more chains no more ties truth speaks or life forever dies Awesome write! hugs, Chris |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Perhaps it is they who seek out you so that you can share it with those who cannot hear ~ or see...  Love & Spirit Light, EA |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
how can we know us without seeing those around how they fit into the soup of our puzzles enjoyed it ms |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all for you kind replies My spirit will rise |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Beautiful, heartfelt write. I am late getting here as always... but glad that I started at the end, as this was the first one that I read and it was truly a message. Great work m'friend Tima I may hate myself in the morning - but I'm gonna love you tonight |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
"truth speaks or life forever dies" Yes, I agree. I guess we all somehow know the truth but don't bother to access the safety deposit box. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
There is certainly lots of truth within this fine piece of writing..i enjoyed reading this...and there is a lot to take from this too..thank you.. Goldenrose. Justice cannot be for oneside alone, but must be for both. (Eleanor Roosevelt) |
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