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...Night Dance...
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...Night Dance... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. 
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 ~*~*~ NIGHT DANCE ~*~*~ Close her eyes with your hands take her breath away with your mouth... she dances with angels at her back slipping their hands around her holding her close she moves and it is your breath on her neck... a soft music swirling her dress to glimmer like gold like a gem in the night, delicate motions always hovering near... they let her feel the rhythm of the moon beating... in her heart, as you lift her up they give her flight in your arms by her spirit lifted you find... the air has taken the earth from beneath your feet as you hold her forever in this night dance. she whispers your eyes close and endless dreams begin dancing... she whispers... of love and loving of hopes and dreams of yesterday, today and yet tomorrow, the dance continues the rhythm ever changing... ever the same. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love that ending...what a beautiful dance this is |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
the dance continues the rhythm ever changing... ever the same. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Perfection Nancy, pure perfection..... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
my ohhhh my what beauty you weave and this... a soft music swirling her dress to glimmer like gold like a gem in the night, delicate motions always hovering near... they let her feel the rhythm of the moon and me thinks this aptly describes the poet...smiles and hugs, whataread!!!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"they let her feel the rhythm of the moon" this is LOVELY  |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
A lovescape extraordinaire! Tres bien, cheri! KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
As long as the beat goes on... and look at you... congratulations on the milestone, little one...  |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Tinker this is exquisite. Beautifully crafted words with images that dance off the page. It's a very fitting write for your 30,000th post. Bravo!! And encore!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just beautiful. Congratulations on another milestone!! 30,000...WOW !! luv & hugs  |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
so many posts - congrats and what a wonderful dance you write - wonderful images and emotions and you write it great Nancy - Paul |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: hmmmm .... what a feelin! Very beautiful, dear Nancy! Congratulations on 30.000 .... WOW! "Enchantress" fits! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Close her eyes with your hands take her breath away with your mouth... a wonderful beginning~~ hugs M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read and imagine...James |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
This deserves to rise again. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I see you dancing, lovely Enchantress. K |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Enchantress - this was beautiful. I love a night dance... CG |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Thank you all so very much for your wonderful response to this piece. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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