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Day Long Hands |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Day Long Hands long and hard came reflections in-between the up and down of this day soft and smooth should have been flow of loving thoughts but short and swift were moments interludes of time breathless left her breathless they came too fast left too quick myriad thoughts and pain pain hurts absent from body but renders the mind useless never seen but words touched then the heart broke pain hurts what does care look, feel like? I would put a stamp on care and send it direct bypassing hands straight to your heart if it would take the pain away from you if I could I would… long and hard this day has been long and hard and difficult of dream distant on the wind of keen I heard long the scream of scoria ~ suffering ~ seeking out the next victim and I went to see, to hear, to hold, quietly listen, even though all that could be offered was a helping hand 01.10.01 slightly revised 05.18.05 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
your helping hands sweet lady...are all one needs to bring healing to those who need. thank you for the specialness of this beauty... I really want to care, |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
"I would put a stamp on care and send it direct bypassing hands straight to your heart if it would take the pain away from you" I'm sure you do this, with or without a stamp! Such a dear, sensitive person you are! miscellanea |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and I went to see, to hear, to hold, quietly listen, even though all that could be offered was a helping hand sometimes, a helping hand, is like a 4 million dollar house...warm and full of compassion...as yourself, as your poems, in touch with all connections... Wonderfully written and felt |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Such a kind and caring soul you are Karilea.. Very touching piece of you here. Heart hugs~Nancy Life is one great big canvas; |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful you shining through |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Ditto on the above. Beautiful sentiment in this write. JL  |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Bless your heart. hugs, Chrislane |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
"I would put a stamp on care and send it direct bypassing hands straight to your heart if it would take the pain away from you" I am certain you would, lovely this Kari and you. mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So rich in compassion, dear Karilea. True caring shared beautifully. Love, Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
what does care look, feel like? sighing~~ hugs M |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
helping hands and a compassionate heart, always the best...you worded it well. K |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
The world needs such people as you are.....because you are the essence of this poem. You make things right when they can't be made right, somehow repair what is broken beyond fixing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie I agree with Ed!!  |
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