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Open Poetry #35

May

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-05-18 10:05 AM

How long
Has it been
Since she let her hair down

Leaving her desk
The quiet librarian
With lowered eyes

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2005-05-18 11:27 AM

maybe too long.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2005-05-18 01:45 PM

OUTSTANDING!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-05-18 02:18 PM

nice one

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-05-18 07:32 PM

I'm in the library right now...using the computer...observing the librarians...James

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-05-18 09:58 PM

yep,too darn long

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

6 posted 2005-05-18 10:09 PM

And what if
you put the question mark
at the end of the second line
instead of the third . . .

Different
understanding . . .
yes?

John

Drauntz
Member Elite

since 2007-03-16

Posts 2905
Los Angeles California

7 posted 2007-04-30 03:18 PM

I love the one in the reply. because I read like that
no tricks on reader! or I will tail along more.

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