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Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29
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0 posted 2005-05-17 05:59 PM


Above my head there’s only sky
blue like a woman’s eyes
looking at and through me
till naked I’m reduced
to a paper cut-out doll
placed so and then just so
on this landscape, mother earth.

And sky is whimsical and sly
no mountain is too high
or river deep and fearsome
for his creation to survive
though pasted in between
paper fronts and rear end tags
there’s a heart and a mind
begging for release.

Rises up the wind
and symbols fall down flat
there to lie in humbled pose
till lifted to new heights
by the blue, so very blue,
sky of my delight.

It happens thus sometimes
when forced to realize
there is a someone somewhere
breathing far too heavily
over paper cut-out dolls
on “let’s pretend” landscapes.      

And so I cry sometimes
when dirt gets in my eyes
but that’s the way it goes
up and down, up and down,
until the sky of my delight
bids me again adieu!  

Helen / 17 May 2005


© Copyright 2005 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-05-18 09:36 AM


Thank you for this, Helen.

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2005-05-18 10:43 AM


Thanks for the read Sunshine.  
passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2005-05-18 09:26 PM


this is a good one Helen!
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4 posted 2005-05-18 09:46 PM


thanks for sharing`

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Margherita
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5 posted 2005-05-19 05:13 PM


Yes, that's the way it goes ...

There is depth in this write!

Love, Margherita

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