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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-05-17 08:26 AM



Powerless I become,
peering through,
your green windows,

Strong I remain,
I cave in,
under your spell,

One person only
has this power,
over me,

letting down
my guard,
I am weak,

Passionately,
thrusting,
my kisses upon you,

I have lost
all control,
all senses come alive,

These kisses,
I would die for,
these kisses are heaven,

The world no longer exists,
where the past is forgotten,
drive my mind crazy,

Take me there,
to the unknown,
nothing remembered,

to oblivion....


"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

© Copyright 2005 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2005-05-17 08:29 AM


wow!!!!

enjoyed this...and you...brave and most steadfast woman...this was a picture of someone who wouldn't give her heart easily...but when she does, it's complete submission, and her love is very faithful and strong.  


A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2005-05-17 08:35 AM


WOW!

At you Lee, you ar right on target, yes you are so right about me, every word you said is true, perfect in reading me and my poem!

Thanks for seeing ME~

~ARH

"Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away."

MGROVES
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california
3 posted 2005-05-17 03:17 PM


a beautiful   strong  sensual  woman~

  

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2005-05-17 04:05 PM


Methinks ye be a woman worthy of a man's devoted attention!

You do, indeed, have a romantic heart!


EA

CastleGuard
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since 2003-04-30
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Alberta, Canada
5 posted 2005-05-17 08:22 PM



Beautiful, sensual.....this touched me deep.

The coach is waiting....

CG

adagio
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since 2005-03-19
Posts 449
Marrero, La.
6 posted 2005-05-19 01:26 PM


A beautifully passionate piece of writing. oozing with sentuallity, (please pardon my spelling errors as I am running out of on line time)  a.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
7 posted 2005-05-21 11:19 AM


the abyss of oblivion is bliss

Smiles - S

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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