Open Poetry #35 |
Oblivion |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Powerless I become, peering through, your green windows, Strong I remain, I cave in, under your spell, One person only has this power, over me, letting down my guard, I am weak, Passionately, thrusting, my kisses upon you, I have lost all control, all senses come alive, These kisses, I would die for, these kisses are heaven, The world no longer exists, where the past is forgotten, drive my mind crazy, Take me there, to the unknown, nothing remembered, to oblivion.... "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
wow!!!! enjoyed this...and you...brave and most steadfast woman...this was a picture of someone who wouldn't give her heart easily...but when she does, it's complete submission, and her love is very faithful and strong. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! At you Lee, you ar right on target, yes you are so right about me, every word you said is true, perfect in reading me and my poem! Thanks for seeing ME~ ~ARH "Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take - but by the moments that take our breath away." |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a beautiful strong sensual woman~ My spirit will rise |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Methinks ye be a woman worthy of a man's devoted attention! You do, indeed, have a romantic heart! EA |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Beautiful, sensual.....this touched me deep. The coach is waiting.... CG |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
A beautifully passionate piece of writing. oozing with sentuallity, (please pardon my spelling errors as I am running out of on line time) a. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
the abyss of oblivion is bliss Smiles - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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