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remembering the miller's son
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remembering the miller's son |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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If for nothing else I do admire how you change your suit inbetween the acts as if colors in their differing made up for the lack of tact... I wish that I were less astute, even in this fog I slip knowing you and loving less squinting in the sun's reflect of armour in anonymous as if you thought I'd not detect the hammer speaks like a thumb print I read your words I feel your chest knowing you're the Miller's son-- shame on you for trying to hide the heart of you that kept the time of everything between, I touch. Have it your way, love, I'll miss the spaces inbetween the words. |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Very interesting write Serenity. I liked these lines... If for nothing else I do admire how you change your suit inbetween the acts as if colors in their differing made up for the lack of tact... c'est la vie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile Brother Tim ran himself over. It would prolly be more entertaining if I just told the story, but actually, I was a little annoyed at him. It was a close a call, and I almost lost another. *shaking my head* df and how do all these people end up in my flock?  nip nip |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
all i can say is..WOW! and give plenty  Mxx "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
shame on you for trying to hide the heart of you that kept the time of everything between, I touch. Have it your way, love, I'll miss Oh goodness, you get so down to the nitty gritty, and I really love going there to read you. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You have to ask Ed to send you this tune "The Blacksmith" because this IS it. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I wish that I were less astute, even in this fog I slip knowing you and loving less squinting in the sun's reflect" nice... very nice. love you lady.  "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
spill the full story... I'm parched...  |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Very well done karen, As I have come to expect from your words. Also I may have a surprize for you soon! adagio |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I wish that I were less astute, even in this fog I slip knowing you and loving less squinting in the sun's reflect of armour in anonymous The depth of your words pull the reader in, wanting more, wanting to hear the whole story...amazing! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed the read you always tell a fine story |
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adagio Member
since 2005-03-19
Posts 449Marrero, La. |
Just can't get enough, had to come back and re-read adagio  |
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