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step seven of twelve
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step seven of twelve |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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you are temptation and mist my longing to taste of you to sip your offerings of heart spill and become drunk upon the wine of your mind and ambrosia of your heart you are of the finest vintage a bouquet of delight a swirl of color oh what a sight what flavor! Yes, you are temptation begging a sip but should I taste how then could I stop? for the bottle begs to be drunk in total— and I am upon step seven of twelve and must walk on s.a.t. note - this is not about alcohol  If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Yes, you are temptation begging a sip but should I taste how then could I stop" how indeed!!  enjoyed |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Susan!! Very much enjoyed sweet lady~ Life is one great big canvas; |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, I knew that this intoxicating piece was not about alcolhol!   Linda |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
note - this is not about alcohol I felt when reading, this is about forbidden love? Beautifully written, felt the passion and warmth embrace...lovely |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here, my friends - thank you - Hugs - Susan LeeJ - you one smart cookie If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Awesome write! Eric |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
"he" is everyones temptation.....beautifully said.... I came from the mountain |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Love this one too. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
upon the wine of your mind and ambrosia of your heart Moving right along, because you too, are like ambrosia, Susan. And your writing never fails to move the reader in me. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful~ My spirit will rise |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and then on the morrow when the day turns around and you see your footsteps there in the sand of recognition will you try them on and say they are like mine but they could not be for that was just a silly dream and I have never loved this way step 13..kewl stuff mrs. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you friends! your words, your warm, they smile me. Greeneyes - yes EV2 - so good to see you my friend!  Bluesie - you are most kind dear - Eric - you bless me with your eyes MGroves - thank you for leaving your warmth D - step 13 - always did like that number  Hugs all -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Susan Enjoyed the honesty in this. There are many kinds of temptation and you are a strong woman to turn your back on any of them. [This message has been edited by Martie (05-17-2005 01:41 PM).] |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Martie - thanks for the encouragement and your heart - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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